Screenshot of my current progress with Ijona

This just showing my current progress. It is unfinished, however, I think I'm going to be altering the plot a bit - changing Kōrī to a young boy, just to give a bit of an introduction. Also, the backgrounds look a little off: there's too much variation in the colours. I'll probably have to do some research about background design, since, overall I'm not that good at it, and I don't know many techniques for background design. The outlines, I feel are good enough, but it's the colouring and toning that I need to work on. (Reminder: this is a remake of my first page of Iōna, since that one sucked XD.)